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Friday, November 30, 2012

All about my little sister

Hello Everybody that is reading my blog.
Today I am going to tell you all about my little sister.
My sister has colorful eyes it is like the blue sky up in the heavens 
She has a lovely smile  everyday I see her.
My sister had long spider legs
She is 2 years old and her full name is
Tewaimarie Mariana Mana Pukeiti
She is pretty cool sometimes she is not very nice to her family but I love my sister she is cool
she call's me by my hole name Jessica but it is better with my short name Jess.
So this is all about my sister 
I LOVE HER VERY MUCH

4 comments:

Nga Kaituhi o PES said...

Oh Jess - I love the way you have described your little sister. I can feel the aroha you have for her in your words. Nice work. You are getting so much better at showing with your words and using some effective writing techniques too- well done!
It would be great to see the last couple of sentences punctuated. Keep up the independent writing - you have really improved this year!
Mrs Nua

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