I am a Year 8 student at Pt England School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 22 and my teacher is Mrs Nua.
Monday, November 19, 2012
The Eclipse
On Wednesday the 14th 2012 somehow it never happened in years the very first time New zealand had the eclipse the same day as our manaiakalani film festival . It is incredible it happened everywhere around the world it happened at night in the morning really it’s never happened in 2012. On the news it said it was really cold it was like 0 decrease . Room 22 saw it first then the other classes I liked it because it was very cool and it made my lips cold. While it happened we took some video.
I am going to tell you this what I got of the news the next eclipse might happen in 2023 that is likefully going to happen.
THE END
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2 comments:
What a great picture Jessica. Make sure you peer share, and ensure that your writing makes good sense before you post.
Mrs Nua
Kia Ora Jessica,
You've given us good information.
Next time re-read your work. If it helps, read it out loud to see if it makes sense.
Mr. O'Connor
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